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Blue Devil
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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Mon Mar 03, 2008 3:02 pm

Some of the shading and lighting effects in that look really nice. However the colours and perspective could be better.
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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Fri Mar 21, 2008 10:26 am




Sorry, the left hand is holding the trigger. I'll try to fix that.
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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Fri Mar 21, 2008 11:30 am

Why does the left hand have fingers and the other doesn't?
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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Fri Mar 21, 2008 8:28 pm

Meh, the stick looks wierd from this point of view. From the avatar, the head looks wierd.
It also looks like the leg connects to the body very early.

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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Sat Mar 22, 2008 3:41 am

Camaro wrote:
Why does the left hand have fingers and the other doesn't?

Unfinished, sorry.

Andy wrote:
Meh, the stick looks wierd from this point of view. From the avatar, the head looks wierd.
It also looks like the leg connects to the body very early.


I'll try to fix that, by the way, my avatar is a different picture.
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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Sun Mar 23, 2008 11:33 am

Add a black background color and then add a gradient with low alpha over it, that would look better imo.
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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Sun Mar 23, 2008 11:48 pm

Garrett wrote:
Add a black background color and then add a gradient with low alpha over it, that would look better imo.

Perfect Silly

Edit: How's this?


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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Mon Mar 24, 2008 1:42 am

Umm.. is this only me, or is his hand infront of the weapon, instead of behind?
I dont really see how he is holding the weapon :S

The perspective, is this from behind looking, or .. what?
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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:21 am

Fixed <3

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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:35 am

Much better. But the gradient should be from the top left corner to the bottom right corner.
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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:44 am

Aah, that's what you meant. Thanks, I'll do it now.
I love your advises. Silly

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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:34 pm

Very Happy

What is this for anyway?
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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Tue Mar 25, 2008 12:30 am

Garrett wrote:
Very Happy

What is this for anyway?

Just a new project I'm doing, it's gonna be my biggest one yet. I've even hired voice actors, but need more. Happy


It's called "Restriction".

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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Wed Mar 26, 2008 9:55 am

Mr.P wrote:
Umm.. is this only me, or is his hand infront of the weapon, instead of behind?
I dont really see how he is holding the weapon :S

The perspective, is this from behind looking, or .. what?


Dude, what the heck are you talking about.

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PostSubject: Re: Post your screenshots   Wed Mar 26, 2008 2:15 pm

Umm, i think its to late to find out.
AkleMo made an misstake on his picture he drew.
Note his post just after mine;

'' Fixed <3 ''


He fixed it, when i told him.
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