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Scruffy
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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Fri May 23, 2008 5:28 pm

It's just a shooting excercise, not a cinematic :S
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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Fri May 23, 2008 5:50 pm

killerkb wrote:
Yes, the street markings are to big, and there a bit to the left. And yes, the lamps are a bit small.

Other than that, I really like it.
Finish it. You got me hooked.


Yes, for the love of all things holy and awesome, FINISH WHATEVER THE HELL IT IS THAT YOU'RE MAKING.

I don't want to see something look promising only to collect e-dust and never be touched again. Also, DON'T RESTART it. That's usually what leads to you never finishing it.
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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Fri May 23, 2008 5:56 pm

Haha, okay. Shocked

Scruffy wrote:
It's just a shooting excercise, not a cinematic :S


Thanks for reminding me. Cute
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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Sat May 24, 2008 9:22 am

I love that screenie.


And I finished my exercise: http://www.antiup.net/view/1285/

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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Sat May 24, 2008 11:14 am

it says ACCOUNT SUSPENDED.
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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Sat May 24, 2008 4:07 pm

haha owned
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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Sat May 24, 2008 6:09 pm

must be a hosting thing, since I dont got no account or anything.
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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Sat May 24, 2008 8:04 pm

Antiup probably used up its bandwidth cause I can't see it at all too.

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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Sat May 24, 2008 10:31 pm

It lacked a lot of recoil and there weren't many frames in-between the shots. Your getting better though. (I saw it earlier, just didn't post)
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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Sun May 25, 2008 6:22 am

All you did was move the camera and added some effects. There was virtually no stick animation, only filters and muzzles.

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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Sun May 25, 2008 9:32 am

wat

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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Sun May 25, 2008 11:42 am

eh...
The background details made it look bad.
The muzzle flash was alright
The recoil was... alright I guess, maybe a little more would be good
The stick's position looked wrong, and the M4 was waaaaay too big.
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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Thu May 29, 2008 12:30 am

http://www.antiup.net/view/1860/
I fixed a few stuff. Having problems with the shells though.

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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Thu May 29, 2008 7:31 am

Sorry, but what did you fix? Looks identical to the previous one. Try not to move the camera so much, creates too much motion sickness for me. (not really)

I suggest you restart. Cute
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PostSubject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting   Thu May 29, 2008 12:10 pm

Scruffy wrote:
eh...
The background details made it look bad.
The muzzle flash was alright
The recoil was... alright I guess, maybe a little more would be good
The stick's position looked wrong, and the M4 was waaaaay too big.
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