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Scruffy Source Mapper

Number of posts: 833 Age: 16 Location: Vancouver, BC, Canada Registration date: 2008-01-20
 | Subject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting Fri May 23, 2008 5:28 pm | |
| It's just a shooting excercise, not a cinematic :S |
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Camaro R14 Principal

Number of posts: 414 Age: 19 Location: USA Registration date: 2008-01-21
 | Subject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting Fri May 23, 2008 5:50 pm | |
| | killerkb wrote: | Yes, the street markings are to big, and there a bit to the left. And yes, the lamps are a bit small.
Other than that, I really like it. Finish it. You got me hooked. |
Yes, for the love of all things holy and awesome, FINISH WHATEVER THE HELL IT IS THAT YOU'RE MAKING.
I don't want to see something look promising only to collect e-dust and never be touched again. Also, DON'T RESTART it. That's usually what leads to you never finishing it. |
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Garrett Crew

Number of posts: 1127 Age: 17 Location: United States Registration date: 2008-01-19
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AkLeMo R14 Principal

Number of posts: 430 Age: 14 Registration date: 2008-01-28
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Scruffy Source Mapper

Number of posts: 833 Age: 16 Location: Vancouver, BC, Canada Registration date: 2008-01-20
 | Subject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting Sat May 24, 2008 11:14 am | |
| it says ACCOUNT SUSPENDED. |
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Skitzabix 3D Animator

Number of posts: 190 Age: 16 Registration date: 2008-02-24
 | Subject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting Sat May 24, 2008 4:07 pm | |
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Scruffy Source Mapper

Number of posts: 833 Age: 16 Location: Vancouver, BC, Canada Registration date: 2008-01-20
 | Subject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting Sat May 24, 2008 6:09 pm | |
| must be a hosting thing, since I dont got no account or anything. |
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Andy R14 Principal
Number of posts: 413 Age: 16 Location: USA Registration date: 2008-01-20
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Garrett Crew

Number of posts: 1127 Age: 17 Location: United States Registration date: 2008-01-19
 | Subject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting Sat May 24, 2008 10:31 pm | |
| It lacked a lot of recoil and there weren't many frames in-between the shots. Your getting better though. (I saw it earlier, just didn't post) |
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Andy R14 Principal
Number of posts: 413 Age: 16 Location: USA Registration date: 2008-01-20
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Ony Crew

Number of posts: 557 Age: 19 Location: Canada Registration date: 2008-01-19
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Scruffy Source Mapper

Number of posts: 833 Age: 16 Location: Vancouver, BC, Canada Registration date: 2008-01-20
 | Subject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting Sun May 25, 2008 11:42 am | |
| eh... The background details made it look bad. The muzzle flash was alright The recoil was... alright I guess, maybe a little more would be good The stick's position looked wrong, and the M4 was waaaaay too big. |
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AkLeMo R14 Principal

Number of posts: 430 Age: 14 Registration date: 2008-01-28
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Garrett Crew

Number of posts: 1127 Age: 17 Location: United States Registration date: 2008-01-19
 | Subject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting Thu May 29, 2008 7:31 am | |
| Sorry, but what did you fix? Looks identical to the previous one. Try not to move the camera so much, creates too much motion sickness for me. (not really) I suggest you restart.  |
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Scruffy Source Mapper

Number of posts: 833 Age: 16 Location: Vancouver, BC, Canada Registration date: 2008-01-20
 | Subject: Re: [Exercise] Shooting Thu May 29, 2008 12:10 pm | |
| | Scruffy wrote: | eh... The background details made it look bad. The muzzle flash was alright The recoil was... alright I guess, maybe a little more would be good The stick's position looked wrong, and the M4 was waaaaay too big. |
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