http://www.swfme.com/view/1124042

I'm actually rather happy with how this test turned out (specifically the effects).

Constructive Criticism please. Specifically, I'd like to see comments on:
Sounds
Effects (Smoke, cartridges)
Animation

*Make sure your PC doesn't suck horse nuts... It may not be able to handle the effects, even though it ran relatively smoothly on mine.

**Additional note: The first time it runs (first burst), it UBERLAGS. After this, it shouldn't happen anymore.

Might be worth adding that I'm [joke] rustier than Peatrit's assvibrator. [/joke]Just poking fun at the little bugger... Not to be taken seriously.

I rather like the smoke effect from the gun and the ejection port, but I think it was a bit overkill to add it to the magazine insert area (name?). As for the shells, I can understand why you would make them fly at the screen, but you should mix it up a bit and have a few of them not go nearly as far.

The body, you already know, is stiff and mechanical.

Other than that it's quite decent.

Ditto to what Camaro said.

Hes a little too tall imo, but nice job man. =D

Thanks for teh feedback :3

so for sounds, the rustling stops and theres silence for a brief period, it seems as if only when the guns' in motion is the rustling there too.

shells and smoke are awesome.

for animation, unless hes incredibly focused on his target, his shoulders and his head should move as he reloads.

good stuff.

Thanks Justin : )